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Okay, so I decided that between panels one and two, Elly removes her Nizziepack, releases Nizzie, and removes her coat. I am so done drawing the pack. I was kind of baffled as to how exactly it's supposed to be constructed, and then I found that it's clearer here.
I realize that those are a couple of big, honking books in the last panel. I was initially planning to make April larger in relation to them. I'd considered erasing and resizing the books, but then I thought, "WWLD?" And the answer was clear. "No erasing! No correcting! No resizing!" Hee. :)