One moment, the foobs were in a teal-and-lavender monstrosity of a wedding, and the next they were propelled back into the past. But it was a different version of the past. What happened?
I like how you worked John's future obsession with Elly's despair. You just know that she won't admit the meaning behind the message; admitting that what she wanted is stupid is as hard for her as admitting that she's at fault.
(I also think that this is the first time in her life that she's heard that cliche.)
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I like how you worked John's future obsession with Elly's despair. You just know that she won't admit the meaning behind the message; admitting that what she wanted is stupid is as hard for her as admitting that she's at fault.
(I also think that this is the first time in her life that she's heard that cliche.)
I also think that this is the first time in her life that she's heard that cliche.
Yup--either that, or she never paid attention/thought about it. :)
April_Patterson,
That's for sure; paying attention to things and thinking them through are things she's bad at.
Elly's refrain since day-one seems to this, "OMG No one told me life was going to be hard!"
Elly's refrain since day-one seems to this, "OMG No one told me life was going to be hard!"
Exactly! :)
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